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Berliner Bridge by matze-end Berliner Bridge by matze-end
in Halle Saale
Longtime exp. 2min.
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Okay, to start with, I really like the geometry in this composition. All the strong lines lead inevitably to the intersection of the top left third... but in, fact, it's not even the third. The rule of thirds is actually a simplification of a more complicated concept based off golden ratios... I don't know if it was intentional, but you seem to have nailed that ratio.

The grays in the image are just gorgeous, giving beautiful gradients without losing detail and sharpness. And by using a long exposure to blur the clouds, you've created a wonderful background for the bridge.

My only complaint is that the very top of the image is a bit too dark, and creates a loss of contrast with the guide wires in that upper part of the image. It's certainly not a big problem, but perhaps something to consider.
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kil1k Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful !
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ArchyMiller Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
lovely
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beatlefreak Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
I like this very much. Lines, contrast and proportion, all good.
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vw1956 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Schöne Komposition, tolles Licht:clap:
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MPlichard Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
Excellent composition !!
Great work
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matze-end Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
thanks man :)
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MPlichard Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
you're welcome
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CMGSPhotoArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
Great work whit the lines!
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matze-end Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
thank you :)
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